Errors in Lexigramming fixes

A following example is a not quite a real Lexigram by someone on the web, which has 40 errors to fix in order to transform it into true Lexigram.

MAY GOD BLESS YOU

a e oo u b d g l m ss yy

A DOOME(-D) SOUL LOOMS--
LAYS LOUD BLAME O(n) GOD.
GOD'S EY(E)S BLOSSOM.
GOD'S EY(E)S SEAL DOOM.

GOD AS A MOGUL.
SOLO. BOLD.
GOD--SAME AS ME.
(I) AM GOD.
GOD (I) AM.

(I) SEAL DOOM.
(I) LAY A BLAME GAME.
(I) AM DUMB.

GOD MADE ME SE(-E).
(I) DOOM A SOUL.
(I) AM LOUD--MY
EY(E)S GLEAM.

(I) AM SOLO BLAME.
(I) BLED MY SOUL.
(I) MADE MY BED.
(I) AM SAME BOY--
GOD SEAL MY DOOM.

(I) MADE A MAD BLADE--
(I) MADE A LOUD BOOM.
(I) MADE MY SOUL
A GAOL.

(I) AM GOD. GOD (I)S ME.
(I) MAY BLESS YOU--(I) MAY
DOOM YOU. (I) MAY DOOM
YE SOUL. (I) MAY SEAL YE
DOOM.

(I) BLED YOU--(I) BLAMED
YOU. AS GOD,
(I) BLESS YOU.

(I) LOSE A MAD BLADE.
(I) MELD A GEM.
(I) LE(t) GO BLAME.
(I) BLESS YE SOUL.

(I) AM GOD--GOD (I)S ME.
(I) BLESS A SOUL.
MY EY(E)S BLOSSOM.
(I) SE-(E) AS GOD.

Interesting...
However.....

What the Lexigram actually said after not allowed words are removed.

A DOOM SOUL LOOMS
LAYS LOUD, BLAME GOD
GOD'S BLOSSOM
GODS SEAL DOOM

GOD AS A MOGUL
SOLO BOLD
GOD, SAME AS ME
AM GOD
GOD AM

SEAL DOOM
LAY A BLAME GAME
AM DUMB

GOD MADE ME
DOOM A SOUL
AM LOUD
MY GLEAM

AM SOLO BLAME
BLED MY SOUL
MADE MY BED
AM SAME BOY
GOD SEAL MY DOOM

MADE A MAD BLADE
MADE A LOUD BOOM
MADE MY SOUL
A GAOL

AM GOD, GOD ME
MAY BLESS YOU
MAY DOOM YOU
MAY DOOM YE SOUL
MAY SEAL YE DOOM

BLED YOU
BLAMED YOU
AS GOD BLESS YOU

LOSE A MAD BLADE
MELD A GEM
GO BLAME
BLESS YE SOUL

AM GOD, GOD ME
BLESS A SOUL
MY BLOSSOM
AS GOD

That is what can actually come from a Lexigram of MAY GOD BLESS YOU
A far different message than forcing it it say what is NOT actually there in that phrase.

You do not have 2 of the letter "E"
You do not have a letter "I"
You do not have two of the letter "D" and hyphenating does not make it so.
No letter "N"
No letter "T"

Interesting nevertheless

but does not Lexigrammatically say what you
tried to force it to say, no matter how much you want it to.
One can add letters and try to force a Lexigram to say what they want it to say,
but it would no longer be a Lexigram then.
Your version with addeds in bolded letters below which are not actually from the letters of your source phrase,
totally altering the TRUE meaning.

MAY GOD BLESS YOU

a e oo u b d g l m ss yy

A DOOME-D SOUL LOOMS--
LAYS LOUD BLAME On GOD.
GOD'S EYES BLOSSOM.
GOD'S EYES SEAL DOOM.

GOD AS A MOGUL.
SOLO. BOLD.
GOD--SAME AS ME.
I AM GOD.
GOD I AM.

I SEAL DOOM.
I LAY A BLAME GAME.
I AM DUMB.

GOD MADE ME SE-E.
I DOOM A SOUL.
I AM LOUD--MY
EYES GLEAM.

I AM SOLO BLAME.
I BLED MY SOUL.
I MADE MY BED.
I AM SAME BOY--
GOD SEAL MY DOOM.

I MADE A MAD BLADE--
I MADE A LOUD BOOM.
I MADE MY SOUL
A GAOL.

I AM GOD. GOD IS ME.
I MAY BLESS YOU--I MAY
DOOM YOU. I MAY DOOM
YE SOUL. I MAY SEAL YE
DOOM.

I BLED YOU--I BLAMED
YOU. AS GOD,
I BLESS YOU.

I LOSE A MAD BLADE.
I MELD A GEM.
I LEt GO BLAME.
I BLESS YE SOUL.

I AM GOD--GOD IS ME.
I BLESS A SOUL.
MY EYES BLOSSOM.
I SE-E AS GOD.

A bit of a fix example here.....
______indicate where I have not yet found an allowed word to replace certain words not allowed.

MAY GOD BLESS YOU

a e oo u b d g l m ss yy

A SOUL DOOM LOOMS--
LAYS LOUD BLAME BY GOD.
GOD'S_____BLOSSOM.
GOD'S_____SEAL DOOM.

GOD AS A MOGUL.
SOLO. BOLD.
GOD, SAME AS ME.
ME AM GOD.
GOD ME AM.

ME SEAL DOOM.
ME LAY A BLAME GAME.
ME AM DUMB.

GOD MADE ME_____
ME DOOM A SOUL.
ME AM LOUD--MY
_____GLEAM.

ME AM A SOLO BLAME.
ME BLED MY SOUL.
ME MADE MY BED.
ME AM SAME BOY--
GOD SEAL MY DOOM.

ME MADE A MAD BLADE
ME MADE A LOUD BOOM.
ME MADE MY SOUL
A GAOL.

ME AM GOD. GOD AS ME.
ME MAY BLESS YOU, ME MAY
DOOM YOU. ME MAY DOOM
YE SOUL. ME MAY SEAL YE
DOOM.

ME BLED YOU, ME BLAMED
YOU. AS GOD,
ME BLESS YOU.

ME LOSE A MAD BLADE.
ME MELD A GEM.
ME_____GO BLAME.
ME BLESS YE SOUL.

ME AM GOD, GOD AS ME.
ME BLESS A SOUL.
MY_____BLOSSOM.
ME_____AS GOD.

EDIT/ADD
Here is a Lexigrammatically correct fix.

MAY GOD BLESS YOU

a e oo u b d g l m ss yy

A SOUL DOOM LOOMS--
LAYS LOUD BLAME BY GOD.
GOD'S MADE A GOD'S DOOM BLOSSOM.
GOD'S SEAL A DOOM SEAL

GOD AS A MOGUL.
SOLO. BOLD.
GOD, SAME AS ME.
ME AM GOD.
GOD ME AM.

ME SEAL DOOM.
ME LAY A BLAME GAME.
ME AM DUMB.

GOD MADE ME AS GOD
MADE ME DOOM A SOUL.
ME AM LOUD--MY
SOUL GLEAMS LOUD.

ME AM A SOLO BLAME.
ME BLED MY SOUL.
ME MADE MY BED.
ME AM SAME BOY
GOD SEAL MY DOOM.

ME MADE A MAD BLADE
ME MADE A LOUD BOOM.
ME MADE MY SOUL
A GAOL.

ME AM GOD. GOD AS ME.
ME MAY BLESS YOU, ME MAY
DOOM YOU. ME MAY DOOM
YE SOUL. ME MAY SEAL YE
DOOM.

ME BLED YOU, ME BLAMED
YOU. AS GOD,
ME BLESS YOU.

ME LOSE A MAD BLADE.
ME MELD A GEM.
ME AS A GOD,
GO BLAME.
ME BLESS YE SOUL.

ME AM GOD, GOD AS ME.
ME BLESS A SOUL.
MY SOUL A GOD SOUL BLOSSOM.
ME AM SAME AS GOD.

Lexigrams with errors and fixes suggested

More examples coming and how to fix the errors!
Including "repairing" the following to allow it to become a true Lexigram!

An interesting reading, however with so many hidden and set off added words,
It is not a True Lexigram.

EASTER ISLAND MOAI:

does NOT Lexigram to the following due to the added not allowed words highlighted here in red. The green highlighted words were allowed but had been set off as not allowed for some reason.

EASTERN ISLAND IS LORDS SEAT(throne)
LORDS LAST RITE SAID AT EASTER ISLAND

LOST NOTE/TONE SEALED ON EASTER ISLAND AND (restored) ON EASTERN ISLAND

MOAI ARE LORDS SAINTS ...RED ROAD (the good path) LEADS TO EASTER ISLAND.

STARS LEAD (ASAR/OSIRIS/ (as-t) /ISIS), AND SON, (SATAN/SET) ON A SET DATE TO SAIL SEA AND LAND ON EASTERN SIDE ON SAND TO RED MOAI STONES.

A LIST AND TIN IS ON ISLAND...DANIELS TEAM (tribe) SEALED LIST AND TIN AMID MOAI...DANS TEAM REAL SEERS....

LORDS TONE SAID TO OLD STONES SEE STONES RISE...SEE SAINTS RISE...SEE SATAN RISE TO LORDS SEAT...

MAN (relearns) "MANA"..LOST TO MAN AN EON IN TIME...

SEE SATAN/SET ATONE TO LORD.. SEE MAN ATONE
SEE ASAR'S TEARS...SEE (ast-t's) TEARS... SEE SONS TEARS... SEE MANS TEARS... SEE SAINTS TEARS...AND SMILES!!!

AN EON OLD TALE ENDS AT "LANDS END"(EASTERN ISLAND)

SEE A (toast) MADE TO LORD...SEE TIME (go)..TIME SEEN NO MORE ON (terra/earth) RA SMILES..(terra) SMILES...TIME ENDS ON "LANDS END"...

AN EON OLD TALE/DREAM ENDS ON EASTER ISLAND...SINS END ON (terra)...SEALED IN TIME...

SEE MAN LEARN REAL TALE...LORD IS A RASTA
A SAD TALE...SATAN IS LORDS SON...SATAN IS SONS (of) SON/MAN...SATAN/MAN NAILED EASTERN STAR/EASTERN STAR SLAIN (by) MAN...EASTER IS REAL...EASTER SEALS! LORD EATS (own) TAIL TO SEAL TALE'S END LATER IN TIME....LORD (releases) SON SATAN NEAR END TIMES TO DARE MAN TO SIN.....

SLAIN EASTERN STAR/A RAM ARISES ON EASTER ISLAND AT TALE'S END ON LAND'S END!
EASTER SEALS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The following comments and suggestions were made:

Interesting Lexigram based READING.

It is however customary to provide definitions as footnotes for uncommon terms.

Moai (or mo‘ai) (IPA: /ˈmoʊаɪ/) are monolithic human figures carved from rock
on the Polynesian island of Rapa Nui (Easter Island),

Mana is the concept of an impersonal force or quality that resides in people, animals,
and inanimate objects. The concept is common to many Oceanic languages,
including Melanesian, Polynesian, and Micronesian.

The Rastafari movement (also known as Rastafari, or simply Rasta)
is a new religious movement[1] that accepts Haile Selassie I, the former Emperor of Ethiopia,
as God incarnate, called Jah[2] or Jah Rastafari. He is also seen as part of the Holy Trinity
as the messiah promised in the Bible to return.

This is not a true Lexigram.
Highlighted in bold the parts that caused it to fail as a true Lexigram.

The above example was/is NOT a Lexigram in total.
With 19 added not allowed words, some not set off, and the rest
set off improperly in upper case,
While an interesting reading it is by no means a true Lexigram.

Osiris and Isis were allowed words and did not need set off, nor did Satan/Set.
Additionally it is not AS-T, but is the following:

ISIS and ASET are in effect two different deities. When the worship of Isis began to spread, Aset had already been forgotten for hundreds of years, for at this time only a small group of priests still knew how to read the hieroglyphs on the temple walls. Isis was a Roman deity, reminding of Demeter, a great and loving mother goddess, but her Egyptian origin had sunk into oblivion. The mixup with Aset comes from Greek and Roman interpretation.

The Egyptian Aset

ASET is the original ancient Egyptian deity, who we find mentioned for the first time in Dynasty IV. Then she was known in myth as the sister-spouse and mourner of Wesir (Gr: Osiris), mother of Heru (Gr: Horus) and sister of Nebt-Het (Gr: Nephtys) and Set, children of Geb and Nut of the Heliopolitan Ennead. Her name as it first appears, means "throne" or "seat", indicating the seat of kings, is the same as the hieroglyph above her head. This meant that she was the personified Throne of Egypt who made the kings. Thereby she was the King´s symbolical mother and as such of special significance to him, but in the early days she was not a mother goddess for common people.

http://www.philae.nu/akhet/NetjeruI.html

We owe it to folks wanting to learn to Lexigram
correctly, to show a good example and not hide words or add words not found in the source.
Calling a work a Lexigram when it is not is the issue I take.
A bit more effort and this could have been a true Lexigram.
My advice:
Then when narrative is required,

set it off in quotes or label it clearly as being narrative, preferably AFTER the Lexigram if possible, or put an asterisk * where an explanation is needed and set it as a numbered footnote After te Lexigram.
yadda*1, yadda*2, yadda*3 and so forth.

Also do not add words/letters not found within the phrase you were trying to Lexigram except as footnotes After the Lexigram.

I will post a revision once done, of the Lexigram based reading and transform it into a true Lexigram.